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Your article is too cumbersome. Lop off those repeated and empty words.
你的文章太冗长了. 把那些重复的,空洞的话都删掉.
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His article is too cumbersome. Let's lop off those repeated and empty words.
他的文章太冗长了. 让我们把那些重复的、空洞的话都删掉吧.
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